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the breeze at dawn has secrets to tell you, listen to the birds chirping to the sun, calling, calling you from the forest, put away your dream for now, follow a tangled vine path, to a flowing stream! _____________________ July 24, 2015 Verse - unrhymed Written by Broken Wings Inspiration #7 Rumi For the contest, Complete the lines, sponsor, Nette Onclaud, Fourth Place

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 8/5/2015 8:41:00 PM
So nice, Constance. And I love how your lines got smaller and smaller until you ended with flowing stream. Big congrats for your win.
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Date: 8/5/2015 1:06:00 AM
languidly quilled from the heart, constance.. big congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:39:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Broken Wings :)
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Date: 8/4/2015 8:43:00 AM
I love the write in this Broken Wing! It is fantastic! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:50:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write BW! Wonderful imagery!
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Date: 8/4/2015 12:43:00 AM
Broken,, Congratulations on your win. **SKAT**
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Date: 8/3/2015 9:23:00 PM
B.W., congratulatations on your win a 7 wonderful write. Hugs Eve
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Date: 8/3/2015 4:41:00 PM
the image and imagery are wonderful broken wings - a very restful poem:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 8/3/2015 8:32:00 AM
...been here -- done that --- can't wait to get back there and do it again. Just gotta get my lazy butt out of bed early enough to meet the sunrise.. Congrats on your placement in the contest
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Date: 7/25/2015 12:05:00 AM
Nature has its way of speaking to us; beautiful work.
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