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Tangible

In this world of tangibility it has given me the architectural plan to build my world So my foundation must be right as I have seen it with my own sight And what I see with my exterior eyes has to be the truth For it allows my tangible world to be right Now all I do is focus my actions from with out to deal with the hurt from with in My mind is now the CEO and has stop me from the right of accepting the life burning within From my world of tangibility I don’t know how to deal with the life with in For it is intangible and I cant understand it as it does not fit with my life Now I must think how to bring my hart up to speed And stop my mind from being my CEO

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Date: 7/8/2011 7:11:00 AM
this is very interesting... reminds me of Inception movie! :) and thanx for your kind comment on my poem... appreciate it! :)
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Date: 6/24/2011 11:24:00 PM
Nice feeling. Last lines focuses the real spirit of this poem, I think. " Now I must ...........being my CEO. Carry on...... love, bl
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Date: 6/19/2011 9:44:00 PM
thank you for sharing your work with poetrysoup. your poetry and comments are deeply appreciated
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