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Tangerine Sunsets

I love the end of the day,
when the sun want to climb into bed.
The moon will be rising soon,
showing off it's big bright face.
The white clouds,
are turning a dark gray.
Some flying so high,
as if to say good-by.
I feel the cool night air,
as it arrives as a soft breeze.
This day is almost over,
as the sky brings out it's paints.
Tangerine sunsets composing,
chrysanthemum hymns.
The sky colors match my flowers,
listen the garden will start to hum.
Look the first diamond star,
turn around to see more.
The black velvet night,
with dancing stars as far as one can see. #2

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Date: 5/4/2024 1:18:00 PM
It is very tempting, Paula. Tangerines are the best. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 5/4/2024 1:03:00 PM
Quite delicious Paula. I love tangerines. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 5/4/2024 1:01:00 PM
Lovely line - "...the sky brings out it's paints..." Congratulations on your win dear Paula! :)
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Date: 5/4/2024 10:59:00 AM
"3 Place" Tangerine Sunsets ~ Date Written: 4/25/2024
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Date: 5/4/2024 10:06:00 AM
Great imagery of sunset. Great win.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/4/2024 11:01:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my fun "Tangerine Sunsets" to have Great imagery of sunset. Great win. I enjoyed bringing this one to life.... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.....................
Date: 4/29/2024 9:19:00 PM
Serenity and beauty grace your breathtaking poem, about the end of the day. This is a fave. Blessings. :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/30/2024 9:36:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Tangerine Sunsets" write. Thanks for your kind words & Fav. That makes me very happy. The pretty sky is painted with many beautiful colors every day/night. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..................... 
Date: 4/29/2024 12:39:00 PM
Hi Paula, I love the picture you painted here with your words, "tangerine sun sets". Must fav it..
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/30/2024 9:31:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Tangerine Sunsets" write. I see Fav??? Thanks... That put a big smile on my heart. I love how the sky is painted with many beautiful colors each day/night. Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away..................... 
Date: 4/29/2024 11:02:00 AM
You had me from the title. What a truly delightful write. Thanks for your visit Paula.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/30/2024 9:29:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my fun "Tangerine Sunsets" to be a delightful write. This one was fun to bring to life.... Have a wonderful/blessed day writing away.....................
Date: 4/27/2024 11:22:00 PM
Your poem shows how the end of day can be beautiful. It has an outdoor freshness.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/28/2024 9:43:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Tangerine Sunsets" write. I love the sky by day or by night... Have a wonderful/blessed weekend writing away..................... 
Date: 4/27/2024 4:43:00 AM
"This day is almost over, as the sky brings out it's paints. Tangerine sunsets composing, chrysanthemum hymns." Lovely soulful visuals you paint with your words. Enjoyed the read very much. Inspiring.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2024 9:15:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my fun "Tangerine Sunsets" write to be Lovely soulful visuals you paint with your words. God brings His paints out to paint the night sky. Words are paint on paper. I love the pretty sunset with the pretty colors. A great time of the day... Have a wonderful/blessed weekend writing away................
Date: 4/26/2024 5:08:00 PM
Lovely poetry Paula, sunsets are so magnificent and wonderful, and when stars grace the sky too, isn’t it amazing to see such a glorious view. Enjoy your evening and blessings to you … Beryl
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2024 9:10:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my fun "Tangerine Sunsets" write to be Lovely poetry. The sunsets are so magical with the pretty colors. A great time of the day... Have a wonderful/blessed weekend writing away.....................
Date: 4/26/2024 1:43:00 PM
so lovely Paula what a great write about the night and full of colour hugs Shadow
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2024 9:07:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my fun "Tangerine Sunsets" write to be so lovely/great write. It was fun to write. Hugs...  Have a wonderful/blessed weekend writing away.....................
Date: 4/26/2024 11:21:00 AM
Such a beautiful write Paula. I love the way your title puts the colours in our minds. Lovely imagery throughout. And A joyous feel to night with the stars dancing in the black velvet sky. :-D
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/27/2024 9:05:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Tangerine Sunsets" write. Yes, the sky has many stars dancing on the black velvet sky. I enjoyed to kind words... Have a wonderful/blessed weekend writing away..................... 
Date: 4/26/2024 7:18:00 AM
Dear Paula, your poem beautifully captures the transition from day to night, vividly depicting nature's evening symphony. I just loved the imagery of tangerine sunsets and chrysanthemum hymns is enchanting. It evokes a sense of tranquility and awe at the wonders of the cosmos. This is quite a serene moment with your words. - Blessings, Daniel
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/26/2024 8:40:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you love my fun "Tangerine Sunsets" write. The pretty end of the day can be quite a serene time. I love the way the sky is painted with many beautiful colors both day/night. Have a wonderful/blessed day/weekend writing away..................... 
Date: 4/26/2024 5:49:00 AM
You paint a pleasing picture, Paula. I love the lines: "Some flying so high, / as if to say goodbye." Have a nice weekend :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/26/2024 8:34:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Tangerine Sunsets" write. Yes, the sky is painted with many beautiful colors each day/night. It is fun to watch the many changes the sky will make.... Have a wonderful/blessed day/weekend writing away..................... 
Date: 4/25/2024 5:37:00 PM
Your descriptive words and imagery so beautifully described a sunset. I found your poem captivating....wishing you a blessed evening, hugs, Sara
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/26/2024 8:31:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my fun "Tangerine Sunsets" write to be captivating. I love the pretty sunrises/sunsets with their many colors. Have a wonderful/blessed day/weekend writing away.....................
Date: 4/25/2024 3:53:00 PM
Impressive depiction of the sunset, Paula. Your vivid language and beautiful descriptions were a delight to read.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/26/2024 8:29:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my fun "Tangerine Sunsets" write to have  vivid language/beautiful descriptions were a delight to read. Have a wonderful/blessed day/weekend writing away.....................
Date: 4/25/2024 3:32:00 PM
I like them as well. Nature is a wondrous thing isn’t it?. Great writing Pangie xx
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/26/2024 8:26:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my fun "Tangerine Sunsets" write to be Great writing. Oh yes, nature as well as pretty sunrises/sunsets can be awesome. Have a wonderful/blessed day/weekend writing away.....................
Date: 4/25/2024 2:47:00 PM
Very descriptive lines penned. Aren't sunrises and sunsets awesome. Thank you for sharing your work with us and for dropping by my page. Sara K
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 4/26/2024 8:23:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my fun "Tangerine Sunsets" write to be Very descriptive lines penned. I love the pretty sunrises/sunsets. They sure can be awesome. Hope you are OK...  Have a wonderful/blessed day/weekend writing away.....................
Date: 4/25/2024 1:37:00 PM
Beautiful imagery of sunset, Paula. Much enjoyed your lovely descriptions in colorful diction.
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Date: 4/26/2024 8:20:00 AM
Thank You for stopping over to read/write. Glad you found my fun "Tangerine Sunsets" write to be Beautiful imagery of sunset. Many pretty colors are in the big sky....  Have a wonderful/blessed day/weekend writing away.....................
Date: 4/25/2024 12:15:00 PM
Tangerine Sunsets ~ Date Written: 4/25/2024
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