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ultramarine unfathomable sky, with a hue of gorgeous crimson from the east, sometimes just hint of a dazzling mystifying dot, a red dot on the forehead of an enchanting woman from the orient, then it grows larger and larger, enveloping the ruby-red horizon, a few white pristine clouds floating carefree, bringing tangerine dreams from the yonder hills our omnipotent creator has announced his grand arrival, but hasn't arrived yet. moment of realization - the world wouldn’t be the same without you, and without me. A Brian Strand 2 to 14 lines Poetry Contest Posted on August 14, 2021

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Date: 8/17/2021 7:23:00 PM
our omnipotent creator has announced his grand arrival, but hasn't arrived yet. - Expectant Waiting. Beautiful.
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Date: 8/17/2021 11:20:00 AM
Congratulations for you win Mala. A rainbow of hues is captured in your lines. But I love your conclusion best of all as each of us is needed and each of us is necessary! Well done dear friend. Much love and many hugs!
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Date: 8/14/2021 2:15:00 PM
Well you sure inspired me Mala with this colorful poem for of beauty, Thank you for sharing God bless :)
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/14/2021 3:28:00 PM
Thanks, Rose. Really appreciate your lovely inspiring words.
Date: 8/14/2021 12:24:00 PM
Hello Mala, oh such a beautiful sunset glowing in the water. Breath taking beautiful sunset. Friendship & Love. Darlene.
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 8/15/2021 10:37:00 AM
Hello Mala, yes sunsets are hard to describe you did it very well. love & Friendship Darlene
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 8/14/2021 3:29:00 PM
Thanks, Darlene. Sunset is beautiful, isn't it? Hard to describe! Love ~ Mala

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