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Tangerine

From the ocean’s burst the sunrise screaming first light and mine lover’s splash

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/21/2015 3:36:00 PM

I can see that sunrise..Enjoyed reading about the tangerine sunrise..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara

Janet Runyan

Date: 7/20/2015 7:43:00 PM

I am in awe of all that you communicated in so few words. I wish I had that kind of talent. I can't wait to read more of your work

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/15/2015 2:48:00 PM

WOW, I don't know why, I feel like sunbathing with this ocean burst... Love LINDA

Harry Horsman

Date: 7/9/2015 3:30:00 PM

Brilliant James, this is so visual,

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/8/2015 11:31:00 PM

Hey, James. My hair is not really auburn. Though it goes that way a little bit with the sun. I can do so much with COLORS!!

James Peranteau
Date: 7/19/2015 7:20:00 PM

I know what colour your hair is Andrea, we live around the corner from each other ! Me around here and you around there...havn't you noticed me ? *smiles*.....much love, james

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/8/2015 3:28:00 PM

vibrant, james... feel-good piece.. huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/5/2015 11:55:00 PM

this is pretty cool. I enjoyed that tangerine splash!

Constance La France

Date: 7/5/2015 10:44:00 PM

James, this is a great monoku 7, oddly I was thinking about monoku's today and thinking I would like to try writing some and here is a wonderful example, and thanks for visiting my senryu 13 and for the great comment