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Tangerine

I want to peg you away and stablish you on my lips until the break of day I'll slowly take a sip I want to peel you as you reminisce in your care I'll hold you and tear away your fear My fat juicy and clean loving you is easy your taste so serein so refreshing, so squeezy I want to strip away your bark hold you close to my heart light away your dark and moment by moment take you apart

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/24/2012 6:21:00 AM

I am stopping back to see if you have added any new poems to your list. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry with the world Treisha. You have taken a big step here and I wish you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. I will check back again another day. Love, Carol

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/13/2012 5:12:00 PM

‡ Afore Forgetting To Mention, Welcome, Unto PoetrySoup, Beautiful Treisha. Keep Painting. Love, Rachel ‡

Treisha Williams
Date: 10/13/2012 5:28:00 PM

thank you,

Rachel St.Cross

Date: 10/13/2012 4:32:00 PM

‡ Wow, Sounds Like Some Sort Of, *ucking, Horror Movie, Haha. I Love Your Beautiful Name, Beautiful Treisha And Yes It Is Close To The Fright Night Halloween; Perhaps I Should Consider Turning Todays Post From A Love's Romantica Unto, A Trick O Treat ? Smile. Beautiful Poem In Sweet Tangerine. Love, Rachel ‡

Richard Palmer

Date: 10/13/2012 4:03:00 PM

hi Treisha,welcome to the Soup with this juicy piece,mi luv it ,,

Treisha Williams
Date: 10/13/2012 4:04:00 PM

thank you so much leo.

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 10/13/2012 3:56:00 PM

I enjoyed this a lot...the word "tangerine" is so suggestive, and your handling of personification and symbol is quite masterful. Good work.

Treisha Williams
Date: 10/13/2012 4:05:00 PM

thank you.