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Tanabata

on dark nights I think of friends shining across continents: a constellation whose form is yet unnamed whose nature is love I remember you I remember this small moments cupped in my hands an offering to our great becoming wherever I go I carry your light

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/20/2016 1:23:00 AM
Julia, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*"
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Date: 1/29/2014 9:56:00 PM
Please visit my poem "Vega and Altair" just posted, Julia
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Date: 1/28/2014 6:39:00 AM
Hello, there is a contest going of Catie Lindsey :"The Heart of the Matter" wherein a poet has to choose a poem of another poet on the similar theme. Now your theme is Tanabata and my theme will be Tanabata. I will write on Tanabata with different angle. I have to simply mention your name at the end of my poem. Only. What I need is your consent, I hope this gets through , Julia
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Julia Cheng
Date: 1/28/2014 10:57:00 AM
Sure, that's fine!
Date: 1/27/2014 1:11:00 PM
Congrads for the contest.
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Date: 1/25/2014 7:57:00 PM
If you permit, I will write for Catie's contest, The heart of the matter, naming this poem, Julia
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Julia Cheng
Date: 1/27/2014 3:53:00 AM
Thank you for reading! I'm not sure what your question is though.
Date: 1/25/2014 7:34:00 PM
Congrats. I was attracted by the title of the poem. I too have written a poem entitled TANABATA.. You can find it on My Poems. It was posted as late as 2005
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Date: 1/25/2014 4:15:00 PM
something about this one stayed with me, I couldn't forget it, simple in a way yet beautiful - congrats on your win in my contest! :)
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Julia Cheng
Date: 1/27/2014 3:55:00 AM
Thank you for choosing my poem! :)
Date: 1/17/2014 5:49:00 AM
Creative and joy to read Julia, keep it up.... Lekau
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Date: 1/16/2014 6:17:00 AM
- Julia, enjoyable to read a poem from you - I like it, lovely - well done! - Have a great day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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