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Look at the 1st quarter moon of the 7th Day of the 7th month in the naked sky. There! The two stars Vega and Altair Blinded by love like Yaksha & his beloved In the Bard Kalidas’s epic poem Meghdootam. Vega neglecting her weaving and Altair allowed the cows to stray. So did lovelorn Yaksha in his duties to Kubera. Dereliction in each case infuriated the kings. Vega and Altair separated by the Milky Way And Yaksha from Alkapuri in the Himalayas to Ramgiri. Yaksha expurgated by separation for a year. Vega succeeded in arousing the sympathy Was allowed to meet Altair once in a year Provided no rain on the eve of seventh To unite in the milky way-Scorpion region On the bank of Amanogawa river. Prospero proved wiser expiating Ferdinand By his log bearing as ‘trials of thy love’. Reducing Miranda as ‘rich gift’ or ‘acquisition’ Forever as compensation to Ferdinand’s pains? ============================= Sixth Placement For contest : your best poem ============================== Explanations of foreign words in the poem: Japanese “Tana” means a shelf in English and “bata” is a transformation of “hata” which means a loom "weaving with the loom (bata) placed on the shelf (tana)", One popular Tanabata custom is to write one's wishes on a piece of paper, and hang that piece of paper on a specially erected bamboo tree, in the hope that the wishes become true. According to a Chinese legend, the two stars Altair and Vega, Yakshas : name of the Kubera’s servant Meghdootam: Megh (rainy clouds and Dootam means messenger)An epic poem written in Sanskrit in the year 400 A.D. by the great Indian Bard Kalidas – meaning cloud messenger Ramgiri ; a hill near Nagpur in Central India Alka: the name of the city in Himalayan region also known as Alkapuri Kubera: the God of Wealth in the Hindu mythology the Amanogawa (River of Heaven), Prospero, Ferdinand and Miranda- the character in Shakespeare’s The Tempest.

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Date: 6/11/2010 8:13:00 AM
Such a mezmorizing, truly beautiful poem! It is a best...but then so many of yours are best...a difficult choice! :) Congratulations, Dr. Ram........Carrie
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Date: 6/11/2010 6:26:00 AM
wow, fascinating and beautiful! congrats on your most well deserved win! love, shar
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Date: 6/10/2010 6:59:00 PM
Congrats Dr. Ram on your winning poem in Mac's best poem contest with this wonderful entry .. enjoy much success as u encounter many more victories my dear friend.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"
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Date: 6/10/2010 6:41:00 PM
Gives the reader something to think about and learn from your words. Congratulations on being one of the winners in Mac's contest. Enjoy your honor. I wish you many more. Karen
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Date: 6/10/2010 6:36:00 PM
This is really good...where can I find more info on this?
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Date: 6/10/2010 6:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your 6th place win in my contest. An amazing poem and I appreciate your notes..they brought everything together.
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Date: 6/1/2010 6:27:00 PM
A poem that acquaints us with the stories of different cultures with so much in common. Difficult thing to do and done so well here.
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Date: 6/1/2010 5:46:00 PM
An excelent write Sir ! TY for the interpretations ! Great poetry Dr. ! james
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Date: 6/1/2010 6:16:00 AM
This is excellent. I like the historical backdrop in this poem. The theme is consistent and it flows very well. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 5/31/2010 11:58:00 PM
Bravo my friend... This is a great poem... I was captivated from the very start... I wrote down the info on the Meghdootam.... This goes to my favs!!!! BRAVO.....:JP]
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