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Tan, Tan, Tan

Well she got her magic nose And she looks like the best snowman now Though she’s brand new on the front lawn Compared to all of the old snowmen now But with that magic carrot She will show all of the other snowmen how To get a tan, tan, tan Before all the winter snow melts away Well she stands there all day As the temperature keeps going up now Without ever melting even One of her teeny tiny snowflakes now While other snowmen start to Melt and look like piles put there from the truck plow She’ll get a tan, tan, tan Before all the winter snow melts away Well she knew all along That all the other’s wanted her nose now And since they took both of her arms There would be no way to protect herself now But then the sun came out strong And melted the other snow men anyhow So she’ll get a tan, tan, tan, since the sun melted them all away So she’ll get a tan, tan, tan, since the sun melted them all away

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Date: 1/5/2024 5:08:00 PM
Very good to sing to David, you did it well. Congratulations on your win in Miranda’s contest… Belle
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Date: 1/5/2024 1:44:00 PM
Really liked the rhythm in this one..Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Date: 1/4/2024 8:13:00 AM
How fun! Congrats on your win in my contest.
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David Fisher
Date: 1/4/2024 5:25:00 PM
Thanks Miranda! It was a seasonal challenge, that's for sure.
Date: 12/20/2023 7:37:00 PM
Just don't put her in that 'Little Deuce Coupe.' lol.
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Date: 12/14/2023 4:56:00 PM
Quite clearly for the contest and so well done. I looked, I tried, I failed. You might have inspired me to try again, David. But I’d be working for a place because I suspect first place is spoken for.
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Date: 12/14/2023 6:59:00 AM
Lol. Poor snowman better be careful to not get sunburned. You spruced up the holidays with this poem.
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Date: 12/13/2023 7:11:00 PM
What a fun/creative write. I enjoyed this one.  Have a blessed day writing away..........
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Date: 12/13/2023 5:39:00 PM
This is a work of atr, David and being crowned a FAV. I hope this makes POTD. One of the best poems I ever read here.. I wish I could write like you. I admire your imagination.. I know you don’t try to skip away with a coupleets for a fast laugh. Perhaps I’m wrong, but I see this poem having moving on various level.. Congratulations on a great poem. Pangie
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Date: 12/13/2023 5:10:00 PM
A cute ditty just in time for the season. I think I can hear the early Beatles singing this one, David.
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