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Tamed By a Red Rose

I sat in the park On a dark Autumn day The rustle of leaves Natures death bouquet They swirled and spun Around my park bench What i witnessed next Made my cold hands clench Where the leaves dispersed An angel appeared Tattooed dressed in black My life for i feared On approach to me My heart raced A black angel To me face to face As i await my fate She sees what i hold There's a sadness in her As tears start to unfold She has spotted the red rose I bought for my girl As all around The park started to swirl Leaves flew In sporadic directions Tree's cried Like hurtful infection The sky darkened As thunder rolled One lightening flash And lo and behold As i raised my head She was smelling the rose Her feathers of black In outward pose Staring, watching Trying to believe what I'm seeing A black angel in the park With a entranced human being The clouds dispersed Just as soon as they came The tree's stood silent And the leaves did the same Her hands clasped To her breast they close This black angel cries Tamed by a red rose http://www.thehighlanderspoems.com/fantasy4.php

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 5/7/2010 9:16:00 PM
I love this. I could see the black angel and red rose. The rose brings a sort of light to the angels character.Bravo! Jasmine 'Jaz' Nicole
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Date: 9/2/2009 5:48:00 PM
Magnificent. I'm speechless. What an incredible story in this awesome poem! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/2/2009 2:47:00 PM
luv it! creative ane enchantig, an exelent poem. Ell
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Date: 8/30/2009 10:47:00 AM
Love the imagery in this, particularly the setting. You make a fantasy scene such as this seem very real. I'll be on the look out for black angels next time I'm sitting in a park in autumn! -Katie
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Date: 8/30/2009 5:46:00 AM
Hi James, You paint a very vivid dramatic picture with this well penned poem. I too write many compositions involving the rose - Such a spellbinding creature! Lainie
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Date: 8/29/2009 4:19:00 PM
Such a fantasy unleashed by your words.....and the rose became a symbol of sweet peace and love. ~ nicely done, James! (Thank you for your kind comments today!) love, Carrie
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Date: 8/29/2009 3:50:00 PM
Outstanding beautiful story, Sincerely Moses
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Date: 8/29/2009 3:43:00 PM
Interesting fantasy. Even a rose can win an angel. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 8/29/2009 2:58:00 PM
how sweet ,black angel tamed by a red rose..this is a favs... romantic ,very romantic--excellent--charma
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