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Dawn enveloped in teal veil gown Divided the woods of chatter Rainbow light through pinnacle crown First echoes of early laughter Nesting lieu for flocks stood apart Flowers nodded and seemed to smile Whispers of song in every heart Unicorn met maiden awhile She braids his golden mane above The evening fell the sun went down Gaze spark of grace and tender love A sphere of flames amongst the ground Moon raised and spied from the night sky Trembled the stares a lullaby 11/17/2016

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Date: 11/18/2016 9:16:00 AM
Hi Eve, I enjoyed this from start to finish. It was so romantic. I found it to be a lovely fantasy that had an enchanting feel to it. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 11/18/2016 7:49:00 AM
- Eve, I really enjoy this beautiful poem - a 7 - Best wishes for a peaceful weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/17/2016 6:25:00 PM
Wow Eve I so love this :)
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Eve Roper
Date: 11/17/2016 10:23:00 PM
Thank you, Tim :-):-):-):-):-)
Date: 11/17/2016 6:06:00 PM
Beautifully enchanting Eve. This was such a delight to read, like I was witness to someone's dream. Really nice.
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Date: 11/17/2016 10:22:00 PM
Thank you, Chris, I enjoyed writing this :-) Hugs

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