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Tallulah's Band

There was a fine bird named Tallulah who had the most fine alula* she played on her drum rum-a-tum-tum Fine solos* for her sister Beulah. Fair Beulah thought “I’ll not be outdone!” “It’s my civic* duty to strum” so this one high noon* with her alula she tuned An accompaniment to rum-a-tum-tum! While the gals thought it their civic duty to play music all root-a-toot-tootie they rocked the nest and you know the rest Both gals fell on their plump feathered booties! *Palimdromes used alula [short bird feathers corresponding to a thumb] civic, solos, noon Poet: Debbie Guzzi

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 4/29/2012 8:00:00 AM
This was very cute. A pleasant and enjoyable read. May happiness find it's way to your door and refuse to leave. TLee
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Date: 4/25/2012 1:10:00 PM
Congrats on your winning work..Sara
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Date: 4/24/2012 4:21:00 AM
LOL! Congratulations on your wins and successes Debbie! well done! This is funny...how clever! big hugs,love debby
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Date: 4/23/2012 6:32:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in David's "Palindrome Mad" contest Debbie. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/22/2012 7:26:00 PM
Great one Debbie. Love, Joyce
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Date: 4/22/2012 2:24:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Deb Wonderful piece. LOL Enjoyed. Nice going, my friend. Kudos. luv and hugs, Ralphie
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Date: 4/22/2012 2:16:00 PM
You have made me smile forwards and backwards....(just as a palidrome)...reading such an adorable poem!! one of my favorites!
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Date: 4/22/2012 1:33:00 PM
Well done Debbie, Congratulations xx
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Date: 4/16/2012 1:35:00 PM
lol, had a good chuckle with this one, debs. i know david will love it too. many congrats on your wins. great suggestion for the sonnet title - i wasn't keen on mine and have changed it to abandoned shadows
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Date: 4/15/2012 11:22:00 AM
This poem had me smiling all the way through, right to the last line when I laughed, out loud. (don't like abbreviations)
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Date: 4/13/2012 9:23:00 AM
This is so cute, Deb. Laughed at the rhyme in the first verse - Tallulah, Alula and Beulah. Thanks for introducing us to "alula." Very funny, my friend. Wishing you success in the palindrome contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/13/2012 6:57:00 AM
wow, you sure did a great set here with palindromes (whatever they are called). THAT's how it's done!!!
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Date: 4/12/2012 3:31:00 PM
Good one Deb, you got me with "root a toot tootie
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Date: 4/12/2012 2:25:00 PM
LOL :D Debbie this is too funny! a limerick-palindrome...how cool is that! Love the punch line...lol Best wishes in the contest my friend...big huggsss,love debs
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Date: 4/12/2012 2:03:00 PM
This was a pleasant and funny poem Debbie, like it alot. Well done. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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