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Tall and Proud

The tree stands resplendent tall and proud in all its autumn glory Colder weather makes one shudder reminding us soon the leaves will drift slowly to the ground gracefully fluttering like a ballerina on point, turning to mulch....revitalising the earth. Stop and listen as they fall,.... like the bars of a quiet lullaby Take a deep breath as the earthy smell Penetrates the nostrils. Soon winter will appear Snow will cover the bare branches so they twinkle in the watery sunlight Winter the time when the tree regains its strength.... come spring leaf buds appear..nature reborn.

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Date: 10/21/2020 4:53:00 PM
Very beautiful Green-eyed Girl
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/22/2020 2:11:00 AM
Thanks Tim.
Date: 10/21/2020 11:42:00 AM
Hi Serene, You painted such a beautiful picture with words.I could just imagine the leaf gracefully fluttering and falling down to the ground. Nice write to welcome the winter season. It’s good to see you posting again . Well done. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
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Seren Roberts
Date: 10/21/2020 12:36:00 PM
Thank you. Wasnt going to post it as not up to standard. Changed my mind Lol

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