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Talking Eyes

I see your eyes talking to me; only my eyes can feel your eyes' whisper. The rest of your face is hidden like the sun in the clouds, but your eyes tell it all. Your eyes tell what you want; a kiss, touch of my hands, touch of my skin, warmth of my breath.... Your eyes' stare are steady, bold, and deep. They signal that you are ready for a passionate moment, in the ocean of red rose petals, surrounded by faint, amber lights...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 9/8/2016 8:18:00 PM
very nice
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Date: 7/24/2016 10:51:00 PM
The pic beautiful and the eyes expression...OOOh! So nicely expressed. Congrats! :D Sunita
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/25/2016 3:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, Sunita!! *^_^* Eyes speak a lot, if we only learn to see their messages...
Date: 7/24/2016 7:54:00 PM
I can see how she could make you happy, she's gorgeous. Congrats on your win.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/25/2016 2:58:00 AM
Hehehe. Indeed, that's a jewel to behold.... Thank you so much Richard, for your kind applause!! ;-)
Date: 7/24/2016 6:00:00 PM
Thank you Teddy
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/25/2016 2:56:00 AM
Welcome Royal!! *_^
Date: 7/11/2016 8:41:00 PM
Beautiful sensual write
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/12/2016 5:15:00 AM
Thank you so much, Angeline!! *^_^*
Date: 7/1/2016 5:05:00 PM
The eyes have it, Motion carried.
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/12/2016 5:14:00 AM
Hehehehe. No objections. ;-)
Date: 6/27/2016 8:46:00 AM
The eyes are so expressive, and you detailed the expanse of what they can convey quite well here. Congratulations!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 7/12/2016 5:13:00 AM
You are very right, Dineen. Thanks so much for your applause, enjoying my piece!! *^_^*
Date: 6/23/2016 8:22:00 AM
Great poem and imagery, congrats on your win
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/24/2016 5:21:00 PM
Thank you so much Seosamh!! :-)
Date: 6/21/2016 6:19:00 PM
Beautiful tribute to beautiful eyes!
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/22/2016 2:36:00 AM
Thanks Sara!! *^_^*
Date: 6/20/2016 8:33:00 AM
oog, the windows of the soul!.. very eye-catching read, teddy..huggs
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Teddy Kimathi
Date: 6/20/2016 10:51:00 AM
Thank you so much for seeing my work, and enjoying it Nette!! *^_^*

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