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Talking Cure

The sky was missing The moon was missing The young boy was sick Down with nagging fever Empty clouds hovered As I sat close to him Some dry leaves smiled I took him into my arms Fondly cradled the moment Moved my hand gently over his body Gazed at him smilingly Cradled him in my arms Tears pooled in the two glistening eyes As the regression went on Little flashes of green Peeked from under the leaves I had gathered a little history Preceding the ailment I kept caressing and chatting For about half an hour Green leaves grew, though few And at the guava tree a robin too The medicines continued Next day I heard he was better And in a few anxiety-free days Was perfectly well I must mention before I finish The boy, when a child, Since birth until he was three months Had been in warm physical touch with me Cradling associations are always a cradle _________________________________________________________ July2, 2016

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Date: 7/11/2016 3:28:00 PM
I loved the way you portrayed hope by inserting the green color of the leaves peeking through. Brilliant Probir! Congratulations on your win.7 ; )
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/12/2016 4:41:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 7/8/2016 11:17:00 AM
Congratulations. I like the talking cure with the talk being simply there and without too many words. Lots of wishes.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/9/2016 12:20:00 AM
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Date: 7/8/2016 9:27:00 AM
Probir, congratulations on your 3rd Place podium win in this Premiere Contest for your deep and heartfelt poem! 7 Sandra
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/9/2016 12:20:00 AM
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Date: 7/7/2016 6:16:00 PM
Congrats Probir, for your top placement withg this deep verse!! :-)
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/7/2016 11:17:00 PM
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Date: 7/7/2016 3:02:00 PM
Oh that last line simply grabs one's heart with such compassion. What a heartfelt poem this is ! Well done!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/7/2016 11:18:00 PM
Your comment itself is a great prize ....
Date: 7/7/2016 1:17:00 PM
Your words cradle softly, congratulations Probir...
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/7/2016 11:19:00 PM
Thank you Charlie for your kind appreciation ...
Date: 7/7/2016 9:47:00 AM
The message is clear and touching...nice write and congrats. I tried s'thing different. Could not post coz of constant connection problem, I missed the date. But was glad to be motivated to write to this theme. I enjoyed the poems on win list. Keep it up!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/7/2016 10:10:00 AM
Thank you Sunita ...
Date: 7/7/2016 2:25:00 AM
Very good on the whole - that's why you're a winner. "I must mention before I finish" spoils it, though. It's not a poetic line.
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/7/2016 5:25:00 AM
But except the first five metaphoric lines and similar two in the fourth stanza, the whole of the rest composition is in de facto prose. "... I had gathered a little history ..." are purely prosaic . Any way, this observation of a senior poet I have to take note of for future guidance. ... THANK YOU...
Date: 7/3/2016 6:17:00 PM
Good to see you are still producing quality. I was sick and not expected to live as baby. My Mum never gave up. Nice interplay with some of your words. David
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/4/2016 1:21:00 AM
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Date: 7/3/2016 5:58:00 AM
Heart-tender, possibly a tear-render! The emotion and devotion are both powerful and touching. I enjoyed reading your poem very much ... CayCay
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/4/2016 1:24:00 AM
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Date: 7/3/2016 12:05:00 AM
Tearful and beautiful, I am at a loss for words!
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Probir Gupta
Date: 7/3/2016 1:00:00 AM
I am honoured ...

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