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Poetic Form: Other (Echo Verse)

Inspired: 2023 February 09

 

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UPTO YOU
Contest Judged: 2023 February 10
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

 

*Echo Verse: Focus is on End Rhymes. All lines; first and last words are End Rhymes (a word with more than one syllable, the last syllable will be the End Rhyme). The next line's first word End Rhyme should rhyme with the End Rhyme of the previous line's last word. Also, the final line's last word End Rhyme should rhyme with the first line's first word End Rhyme.

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The imagined force is recast and concentrated into an inorganic material. Intentional, possessing the owner's future with satisfying charisma. The talisman, as some are known to be, is the resulting changeover. Better days lay ahead of the object holders, who will be the subject of good fortune. Prehension of one's life worth and outlook will be exceedingly awesome. Blithesome accesses the favorable heart. Impart the wealth produced, amongst others. Effectuators are doubly loved for that realization. Fruition, when done unnoticeably, is agape love. Hereinabove, the exceptional natures are emphasized. Harmonized beginnings are the effects of the talisman's aura.

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Date: 2/11/2023 12:56:00 PM
Great one. Congratulations for your win :)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/11/2023 4:16:00 PM
Thank you, Heidi, take care and Aloha, William
Date: 2/11/2023 9:22:00 AM
Lovely form William. I so love the symbols represented and the reaching out for beginnings of understanding and acceptance. Congratulations on your win! :)
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Hilo Poet
Date: 2/11/2023 11:01:00 AM
I'm pleased to cultivate and enrich others, Linda, with the vast opportunities, and I also appreciate the recognition, Aloha, William
Date: 2/9/2023 6:56:00 PM
This is clearly high-caliber poetry, given the competence with which it was written. You have penned a piece of art worthy of the greatest acclaim -- by mixing renowned metaphors and an impressive lexicon in this seldom-used: echo form. This is a Fave. Congratulations on your indisputable win dear friend, William.
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Date: 2/9/2023 8:51:00 PM
Cheers, Lasaad, for your honorable endearment plus intuitive distinctions. I am truly blessed by the extolling, and definitiveness that extends to a conlusionary outcome my friend, Aloha, William

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