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Poetic Form: Metrical Tale

Inspired: 2022 August 22

Image: Warrior and Sword by Pixabay

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Wouldst, such mortal traverse the crags of Ne'ermere tails, tis a grayest hour whence Luna's twilight flits her crown whipped freed of mnemonic shimmers. Hail winds bade the cliffs fond too well, the forest dwelleth quietude, erring not to wake ired beasts. The Black fog rose amidst digits crag, gorging deeply in a slithering bout, its murky poking hazing to edge's where hast steep crevices befallen debris burdens. Forgiven enemies miserably hast to but exclaim vapid excuse faltering, absent of morals that yield despair heightens. Invasive spirit's of Ne'ermere hatha steered lost souls to the steppes, to the moors. The ambling blood moon followed a selection of bane thoust chose for dying, fast coming. Inky's inscript on columbine petals are guarded riddle, steeped in thine devil's brew of concoctions. Constant a stirring from tri-conjurers and duo warlocks of ruin, loss, and havoc--locals all of Ne'ermere. A daring wraith bidst the gifts amassed of bless souls, the voids of trifled entities of a doomsday. Shortening the navigated souls in their mortal state of decay, their tenuous grasp of wilted massive fibrous veins. Remnants of a vigorous life surrender to their authentic demise via a hall between perishing slow or death's blow. Truly, a proper act of granting reassemblage their formers, Earth's finality prompt sail to the sunrise of the ancients, and a warriors welcoming.

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Date: 1/4/2023 3:31:00 PM
This is really, really good. An epic Sci-Fan! The archaic language, along with the relentless pace gave the whole piece a kind of nialistic eventuality that drew me along with it to what almost felt like my own heroic conclusion. Well done!
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Hilo Poet
Date: 1/4/2023 4:36:00 PM
A magical tour steep in yore's tea, Lycia, hints of a flavorful brew in anticipation of a setting sun. I appreciate the content of your expressions my friend, Aloha William
Date: 1/3/2023 11:20:00 AM
I detect a rhythm; noting warlocks and yet still an uplifting tale, this is very fresh to me. I enjoyed, Hilo! Happy New Year!
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Date: 1/3/2023 12:25:00 PM
Writing in the archaic style does summon the mystique to engage, Anaya. I'm grateful for your added boost and do enjoy your 2023 my friend, Aloha William
Date: 8/22/2022 3:53:00 PM
Your lines echo as if in a tall and stately hall eternally in remembrance. Elizabeth
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Date: 8/22/2022 5:24:00 PM
Thank you so very much, Elizabeth, I enjoy hearing from you, Aloha~William

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