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Tale of Fright

Frigid hands of a raven sky Capture murmurs of a feral lullaby Terror now awakens to cleave sensation Dismay now devours thoughts of elation Lucid black, the void prevails Grasping the mind into its prolonging trails Body asunder, shattering with dread Passionate with fear from toe to head It is from the night... dark, viscous, and saccharine Dissolving in sky like honey in wine That mesmerizes thought, body, and sight Plundering all into a tale of fright... Inspired by Dean Koontz's books of terror and beauty

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 6/13/2008 3:16:00 AM
tyo... great you once again you have shown that you are a genius
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Date: 6/11/2008 9:43:00 AM
Oooh this is so creepy good. Puts me right in the mood for a scary movie or book. Need to pick up that new Stephen King book. Awesome write! Love, Shar
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Date: 6/11/2008 6:13:00 AM
The eerie feeling is creatively forwarded through your vivid imagery. Nice use of rhyme. Thank you for sharing your talent with us and for your kind words regarding my haiku. Have a good day! Karen
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Date: 6/11/2008 3:28:00 AM
Awesome poem of dark words, just like the book - awesome! Love Kristin
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Date: 6/11/2008 2:53:00 AM
Nicely written. Hope all is well with you, or that it is just Dean Koontz!!! Peace Fathima
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