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Taking Turns

< iron propeller sitting entrance to driveway slowly turning blades like the hands of time on clock longing for extra seconds Hummingbirds buzzing red gold blue and green headed just waiting for turns to capture it's own bountys succulant sugar water Written By Katherine Stella 9/13/2011 Entry For Francine Roberts The View-A Tanka Contest G.L. All

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Date: 9/15/2011 4:25:00 PM
Beautiful imagery, my friend. A sure fire winner, in my opinion : )
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Date: 9/14/2011 1:54:00 PM
Wishing you the best in the contest Katherine. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/13/2011 11:02:00 PM
what a nice idea here the two contrasting images. I really like this, katherine.
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