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I came to poetry a novice, a neophyte, a fledgling oh sure, I had written as a child . . . but that was just the writing of a tenderfoot as my life became more grievous and woeful I found myself mournful and melancholy with a a dolorous melody replaying over and over in my head the years of repression and suppressed pain, and denial had left me with shyness and inhibition . . . I needed to write my sorrowfulness but felt a barrier confused and struggling with my thoughts and words I would flounder, fumble, tumble and stumble with fear- then, I took the plunge . . . I had spent a lot of time in the beginning reading poetry most poems were beautiful or lovely sensual rhapsodies but many were just big words extravagant to me . . . some just a pompous bombast of rage and ranting lecherous and blustering and well not my style I wanted to write poems with depth in every form possible but, I read on and inside me a fire burned . . . it had no flame but was just a glowing smolder simmering I suppressed my passion until I was totally ready the timely care and preparation served me well . . . and with divine providence- I let my pen drip on white it dripped and dripped until it was bleeding words, syllables, phrases finally, I was able to set my emotions free . . . ____________________________ May 21, 2019 Poetry/Free Verse/Taking The Poetry Plunge Copyright Protected, ID 19-1145-887-02 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Written for the Eight Word Free Verse Challenge sponsor, John Hamilton Second Place

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Date: 6/21/2019 12:24:00 PM
Another amazing write Constance, you certainly have a distinct style that is uniquely yours, and congrats on a well deserved win!
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Date: 6/21/2019 2:44:00 PM
John, thank you for the inspiring contest and my fine placement and for the compliment, I have worked hard to develop this style~
Date: 5/22/2019 4:40:00 PM
Constance, you have expressed beautifully how so many of us feel about poetry. When we lay our deepest emotions bare it has a cathartic effect on the heart and soul. This is a wonderful poem! : ) xxoo
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Date: 5/22/2019 5:54:00 PM
Connie, thanks for the beautiful comment and the compliment !
Date: 5/22/2019 3:59:00 PM
Some poems go over my head,unlike David's response, mine is total dismay with poms of seven words or less. I must be dumb. Poetry is a method to let go totally, you are really Goid at it Best wishes in the Contest....Panagiota
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Date: 5/22/2019 4:25:00 PM
Panagiota, thanks so much for the comment and compliment and the best wishes !
Date: 5/21/2019 6:44:00 PM
Many good points. I find many poems boring because the writer is just trying to show me how smart they are. Wonderful piece. Have a great day.
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Date: 5/22/2019 4:24:00 PM
David, thanks so much for visiting my poem and commenting and the wonderful !
Date: 5/21/2019 5:10:00 PM
Writing poetry may be intimidating for some folks, Dear Heart, but I applaud the way you began writing in childhood. You did a great job using the required words and I wish you well in John's contest! Hugs, carolyn
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Date: 5/22/2019 4:23:00 PM
Carolyn, so nice to hear from you and thanks for the compliment and visit, appreciate !

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