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Take These Broken Wings

recently I was very sick very sick and found out to not worry about things of no importance __________________________ August 8, 2012 Poetry/Verse/Shardoma/Take These Broken Wings Copyright Protected, ID 08-414-161-08 All Rights Reserved, 2012, Constance La France For the Standard contest Shardoma Style Sponsored Kim Merryman, Judged 08/27/2012 Third Place _____________________________ Featured Poem_ Week of April 16 - 22, 2023

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James Inman

Date: 3/1/2017 7:45:00 AM

Indeed!

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/9/2016 7:22:00 AM

Hi BW. Congrats for having your fine work featured in the poetry soup homepage!!! ;-)

Constance La France
Date: 2/9/2016 11:29:00 AM

Teddy, thanks for the congrats, yes it was a nice surprised to be featured, this poem was written in 2012, right after my near death experience ~

Abdiel Rios

Date: 2/8/2016 10:16:00 AM

Great poem

Constance La France
Date: 2/8/2016 2:17:00 PM

Abdiel, thanks for visiting my poem and for the great, appreciate !

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/1/2012 10:40:00 AM

CONSTANCE, congratulations in Kim's contest. Nice "Shadorma Styling Poem" enjoyed stopping by today. :-) always PD

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/31/2012 2:59:00 PM

Great topic that you chose for your contest entry..I hope this congrats finds you continuing to heal..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/30/2012 6:38:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in Kim's "Shadorma Style" contest Constance. Love, Carol

Kim Merryman

Date: 8/27/2012 8:37:00 PM

An excellent write, Constance! Thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/17/2012 10:43:00 AM

Awesome write my friend, however the Shadorma Form is 3/5/3/3/7/5, you have 3/3/3/3/7/5! I just thought you'd like to know so you can make adjustments before the contest judging, I don't want you to be disqualified just for something like that! Aside from that the poem is excellent Constance, I really enjoyed reading it! Great Work!!