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''Take My Tear''

Heart traveled to my deepest truth. God unveil the tear that traces the past. Mothers' voice,hand that caressed my face. I can no longer embrace. Loss of such,I surrender to. Confinement of soul,all that is left are visions of you. I cry no more. Set aside a time. Tear on my floor,for this can't be mine.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/2/2011 5:40:00 AM
Tender and touching write Kacey.. good luck in the contest luv.. make sure u type your name on your entry for HG.. I also lost my Mom last year and life is missing a piece of the puzzle with her not here... feeling your pain and loss luv..
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Date: 4/1/2011 3:38:00 PM
Very good!!!! very Good!!!
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Date: 4/1/2011 1:54:00 PM
When the tears cease, a trace of mist remains. A nice message entwined in an artful verse.
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Date: 4/1/2011 10:15:00 AM
I dig it.It is personal,real....
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