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Take My Hand Into Your World

When I'm seen with eyes that gleam and sounds that seem to hover, the pleasure of my presence cared in conversation treasure. I listen and I talk to you. I'm naked, I'm bared but I'm feeling so together. Unconditional feelings arise in me. I'm turned to you to give permission to take my hand into your world for time inside your vision... ...but time gets short. I'm feeling tired. If I was shining now I'm not. my armours getting heavy. I need to leave and rest my thoughts, so I can be the best I can if we will meet again.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 1/20/2016 8:08:00 AM
How wonderful that you've used your poem for lyrics. I listened to you on your soundcloud site and like your voice. I especially liked the Boxing Day song. I hope you continue posting here, Steve, and using your poetic talent to enhance your musical talents.
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Steve Tomlin
Date: 1/22/2016 11:32:00 PM
Thanks Lin. I really appreciate that.
Date: 1/20/2016 3:37:00 AM
I converted this to a song - on soundcloud. https://soundcloud.com/inspiraller/take-my-hand-into-your-world. I'd certainly appreciate any feedback.
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