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Take My Breath Away

you can take my breath away before it decay's it's lost and lonely looking for love and a single white dove my heart yearns wanting to learn your heart wants to share it's secrets nestled deep inside while mine's all beside hurting so much feeling so alone till you came along and i feel like i belong Karen Croft inside rhyme contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 3/21/2011 12:07:00 PM
beautifully worded thoughts with inside rhymes, karen
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Date: 3/20/2011 9:02:00 AM
very nice Karen... so enjoyed your thoughts today....Michael
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Date: 3/20/2011 8:44:00 AM
A sad moving poem described in its best emotions... I sure.enjoyed it all...take.care...p.d
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