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~Take Me Now (2)~ Take me now with You, Deep right inside Your heart, So deep within You, Where nothing or Anybody, Can ever come, between You and I. Take me now beyond, The moon and the stars At night, Take me now beyond, All this, we both can See, To a far away place, Where we've never Been before Now. Let me be, all I can be With you, Every part of you, As you are of me, For your love, Will always show me the Way, Where I can feel always Safe, When we're are together, Between Heaven and Earth. So take me now With you, To that wonderful place, Beyond words and all kind of Cares, Come to me, my Love, Take me now There's no more time To lose. Dorian Petersen Potter aka ladydp2000 copyright@2015 January,13,2015

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Date: 2/7/2015 8:21:00 PM
Hi Dorian,my heart has awoken,Beautiful pen and nicely done ..thank you tonytocaa
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 2/19/2015 12:49:00 PM
Thank you so kindly,Tony, for stopping by and commenting. Much appreciated my dear friend! I wish you a very lovely day! In His light! God bless you! :)Love n' hugs! xxx D "
Date: 1/18/2015 10:10:00 PM
Beautiful
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/19/2015 2:10:00 PM
Hi Funeka! Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving me such a sweet comment. Much appreciated my dear friend. Have a very lovely day! :)Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^
Date: 1/13/2015 12:21:00 AM
Beautiful writing! It paints the picture of love perfectly. The moment when you give your all to that special someone and embrace tem for who they are!
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Dorian Petersen Potter
Date: 1/19/2015 2:09:00 PM
Hi Ty! Thank you so much for stopping by and leaving me such a sweet comment. Much appreciated my dear friend. Have a very lovely day! :)Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^

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