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Take Me Away

Falling faster than a pencil dropping from one hand. Needless to say I feel so sad. I need you to take me away. Come on you calm my senses. Even when I am so tense. I need you to take me away. Come now you know how. Pour me down a another one now. I need you to take me away. The coldness feels soothing. Nothing is going to stop me from quitting. I need you to take me away. Come on you old fool Its my everything, and my tool. Can you take me away?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 2/22/2014 8:30:00 AM
This is nice Adrienne...I used to look to the bottle to wash away the pain. Now I get it all out in my poetry....Hugs Tim
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