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Take Me Away

I dream in darkness. I sleep to die. Erase my sorrow. Erase my lies. Our burning ashes, Blacken the day. A world of nothingness. Take me away.

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Adeleke Adeite

Date: 12/4/2010 6:26:00 PM

wow, this is .... incredible

Suresh Iyer

Date: 12/3/2010 10:01:00 AM

Small poem with great meaning. cheers suresh

Marilyn Hernandez

Date: 12/3/2010 1:26:00 AM

I love the flow of this poem! I can RELATE too! Beautifully written and worthy of its feature!

Vincel Parmar

Date: 11/30/2010 7:46:00 AM

I will rescue, don worry I wont screw.... Just borrow my dreams, might be too good to be true. But at least they wont make you long to be taken away. This is how I help my self too, when from a nightmare I have no way.... You just made me write...., could not resist but to comment. well written....

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/29/2010 6:42:00 AM

A well deserved featured poem you have here Amanda. May you have many more. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/23/2010 5:00:00 PM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed your poetry tonight with its creative theme.. hope u enjoy your time on the Soup and will check out the contests offered to members.. good luck with luv and a Happy Thanksgiving..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 11/22/2010 1:28:00 PM

it is quite deep and intriguing write you have penned, Amanda

Yvonne Roberts

Date: 11/22/2010 11:26:00 AM

I love the use of few words too say so much

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/22/2010 11:04:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Amanda. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you as a new member and us oldies also may enter. If you have questions please feel free to ask ANYONE here. We are ALL willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol

Ashley Sanich

Date: 11/22/2010 9:57:00 AM

I love this it's deep and dark