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Just take it, rescue me, leave me weightless with no feeling. Take a piece, let me drift to a place where there is only two, me with you. Steal it, take the burden carry it with you beside yours make it one. Piece by piece awaken me feel me melt as you take, end this, my forever ache. Please say you will maybe, take another little piece of my heart now, baby. 7/27/15 music to my ears contest- Janis joplin "piece of my heart"

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Date: 7/31/2015 12:32:00 PM
Passionate..Thanks for dropping by..Sara
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Date: 7/30/2015 5:23:00 AM
Wow Lee, you really got into the groove with this one. Good luck!
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Date: 7/28/2015 12:58:00 AM
A great poem capturing the mood! 7
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Date: 7/27/2015 11:09:00 PM
This is great, Lee, you've caught the mood and the style. Groovy. Will do well. Viv x
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Date: 7/27/2015 7:10:00 PM
ahhh, you were very well inspired by that amazing soulful song!!!
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