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Take From the Giving

Plaster the walls with mud. Shake the heavens of the blood. Bitter tasting and sourly sweet. Were the feelings that sat at my feet. Black curtains of faces so torn. Worrying seems so forlorn. Tear the tears and tear the tears. For this is no life to live in fear. Fear the fairs and fair as to the fears. Knock down the wall of misery, And build a bridge to destiny. Fickle fate brought a tickle too late. Draw a line to the other side. Wait for the shadows and soon they will hide. Pick up the pieces of hints that will be given. Guiding the wind from sin and all will be forgiven. Reluctant of hearts too giving. Seeing the messages of happiness to take. Pleasers beware and takers dont dare. Hands and mouths always be there. Yes to all the answers and no to all the chancers. Take this sign from fate so true. Run like the wind and take what was given to you. By Cami Hostetler

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/10/2010 12:33:00 PM
I enjoyed that
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Date: 10/21/2010 12:12:00 PM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Cami. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also which you may enter.If you have questions please feel free to ask anyone here. We are all willing to help and if we don't know the answer we will find someone who does. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/21/2010 7:43:00 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. enjoyed your poetry today.. with its creative theme.. hope u check out the contest scene offered to new members... good luck with luv..
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Date: 10/21/2010 12:19:00 AM
NICE ONE SURESH
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