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Take a Journey To the Mountains

Take a journey to the mountains and feel your inspiring breath of the fresh air there There are beautiful valleys that's curve everywhere and feel your nature love that's blushes while you are there Stretch your arms over the mountains and feel those skies just over there There are white clouds that's sails everywhere and feel your nature love that's smiles while you are there Sing your songs over the mountains and feel those melodies that echoes everywhere There are so many birds that's flies here and there and feel your nature love that's hugs while you are there Take your steps over the mountains and feel your shadow merely follows the movement of your body There are so many greenery that's shower everywhere and feel your nature love that's takes care while you are there Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka All rights are reserved 2014

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Date: 8/4/2014 8:01:00 AM
Very enchanting, Ravi.. You write with a sweet soul.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 6/24/2014 1:08:00 PM
Dear Ravi, This is an enticing description of the mountains. Now as the sun beats strongly in Florida, I wish I were in the cool mountain air. Thank you for sharing your work with us. It's so uplifting. Love, Carolyn
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 7/3/2014 4:50:00 AM
Thanks.
Date: 6/22/2014 6:03:00 PM
Beautiful and inspiring. You are so spiritually in tune with nature, Ravi.
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/24/2014 1:15:00 AM
Thanks for your comment Andrea. Appreciated
Date: 6/22/2014 11:01:00 AM
This is a very symbolic and inspiring poem about mountain my dear friend Ravi. I like it and so enjoyed. Thank you so much for sharing. Thank you so much as well for your precious time reading one of my poems. A blessed weekend! love lots and big hugs, Leonora
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/24/2014 1:16:00 AM
Thanks for your comment . Appreciated
Date: 6/22/2014 7:26:00 AM
Beautiful. I love it :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/24/2014 1:16:00 AM
Thanks for your comment . Appreciated
Date: 6/22/2014 7:25:00 AM
I agree that the mountain views and feeling one gets in mountainous country is inspiring..Great work about the topic..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/24/2014 1:16:00 AM
Thanks for your comment . Appreciated
Date: 6/22/2014 5:17:00 AM
Dear Ravi, Now I need to rethink my next vacation. Was going to go snorkeling, but your "mountains" sound so inviting! Great write, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/24/2014 1:17:00 AM
Thanks for your comment . Appreciated
Date: 6/22/2014 5:02:00 AM
- Thank you for a pleasant journey to the mountains with you on a sunshine Sunday :) - Beautifully written, Ravi - All the best to you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Ravi Sathasivam
Date: 6/24/2014 1:17:00 AM
Thanks for your comment dear Anne . Appreciated. Hugs xxx

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