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Take a Bite

Come on people let's take a bite. Then be the apple of an eye. When it updates ,world so screwed. How an Apple rules the world. I had a bite one day it came. An Apple tablet in my hands. It made me rich and famous. It left my pocket so abused. Over a train or in a cab, You see someone keeps in touch. Busy roads and dizzy mind, When will I buy the latest one. It is somehow aggravating, To live each day in so much pain. I trade my old car just to have you, Then by tomorrow it's no longer new. iPhone ,iPod ,iPad ,Mac and watch. Each day I need to work so hard. To take a bite and have it all. Then left so gorgeous in empty room. Aiyah De Torres 28 May 2015

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Eric Boddie

Date: 8/5/2015 10:19:00 AM

wow aiyah, i didn't see that coming....and i must admit it was mind numbing.....with so much technology that's out today....laziness, obesity, and so much more because it refuses to let the kids play.....

Skat A

Date: 7/19/2015 2:51:00 PM

Aiyah, that's a cool JINGLE! CONGRATS!!!!! SKAT

Viv Wigley

Date: 7/19/2015 1:12:00 AM

Congratulations, Aiyah, well done. Viv x

Eve Roper

Date: 7/18/2015 9:17:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Aiyah.

Tim Smith

Date: 7/18/2015 5:28:00 PM

Congrats Aiyah !!

Jan Allison

Date: 7/18/2015 1:58:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations Aiyah:-) hugs Jan xx

Jill Spagnola

Date: 6/24/2015 11:09:00 AM

Very deep and insightful :), jill

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/15/2015 3:48:00 PM

this one is quite philosophical in mature! I enjoyed it.

Constance La France

Date: 6/14/2015 3:41:00 PM

Aiyah, great write, Well done 7, and thanks for visiting my poem

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/5/2015 1:45:00 PM

- I wish you a beautiful and relaxed weekend, dear Aiyah :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/30/2015 11:47:00 PM

really cool piece, aya... one of your best!... shine on!.. huggs

Skat A

Date: 5/27/2015 6:29:00 PM

I love it...SK

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/27/2015 8:22:00 PM

thanks Skat ! :O)

Kp Nunez

Date: 5/27/2015 6:04:00 PM

Haha...ang kulet! It can't be helped...smartphones, etc., do make our lives a little bit easier, right? Just make sure the usage is kept to certain reasonable degree. Let the Joneses have what they want, I keep what I need. Love this write, kabayan! 7. Hugsies!

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/27/2015 8:22:00 PM

Thanks Kim :O))

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/27/2015 2:50:00 PM

- The technology's power - Everyone must have a new tomorrow !!!! - (But, not me .... I do not like the newest and unknown) - A great poem,dear Aiyah - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/27/2015 8:22:00 PM

thanks Anne for your kind visit and words ^_^

Jan Allison

Date: 5/27/2015 2:35:00 PM

I hope I never take a bite of 'Apple' Aiyah - i have a simple phone to text and call - i am after all a self confessed technological dinosaur lol - great write:-) hugs Jan xx 7 xx

Aiyah Torres
Date: 5/27/2015 2:38:00 PM

haha... I don't have one as well ,Jan :O) "d rather live in jurassic time ^_^ thanks for a kind visit :O)