T-Minus Ten

For understanding, I summon- beckon! But, lo! The Time! It feels Infinite Our lives could change in just a second Or long be gone in just a minute... 'Tis only those who fear Hereafter Who live a life of misery Just fill your Mind with sounds of laughter- And forever think of me!

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Vinayak Pratap

Date: 9/25/2013 10:01:00 PM

evrythng which is born has to die 1 day thr is no use of fearing death its better to enjoy the time lord has given us rather than fearing the inevitable

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/26/2013 7:27:00 AM

I agree with you, Vin. Thanks for taking time to read and review this piece; I very much appreciate it :)

Wayne Hill

Date: 9/22/2013 8:40:00 AM

you have a sly sense of humor. Yes, we could all be gone in seconds, and there is no need to fear the next life.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/23/2013 5:34:00 AM

Thanks for the read and review, Wayne; I'm happy you agree with the sentiment and enjoy what humor I try to sporadically inject into my pieces. Thanks again! :)

Mustapha Mohammed

Date: 9/18/2013 5:30:00 AM

Deep philosophical write Archaic that compliments an impeccable rhythm and rhyme.

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 9/18/2013 6:38:00 AM

It's people like you who make me smile just about every single morning when I log in, Mustapha. Thank you for making my morning that much better :)