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System or Student

they go to school
receive cap and gown
why can't they read and write?

©Holly P. Moore
   December 2012

Richard Lamoureux's QuestionKu Contest

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  1. Date: 12/17/2012 2:15:00 PM
    Hello Holly, stopping by to say hi... going through a few of your poems.. LOL..the titles that stand out to me, already have my comment... I'll be back later on tonight, to visit your latest poem..pd

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 3:42:00 PM
    VERY good one!!! Congrats on the winners list.

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 7:56:00 AM
    Hi Holly, good Questionku, wish I had the answer. Thanks so much for entry.

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 4:33:00 AM
    Congrats on your winning spot Holly and an excellent question love xx

  1. Date: 12/11/2012 2:00:00 AM
    A well thought out quetionku to a problem that continues to plague our schools. Congrats on your win!

  1. Date: 12/10/2012 9:39:00 PM
    a wonderful questionku... one of the best.. this happens more than you know.... good luck in the contest..pd

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 7:35:00 AM

  1. Date: 12/8/2012 2:27:00 AM
    Holly I like this a lot, good luck....David

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 4:26:00 PM
    Good joining of concept & grammar with lines 1 & 2...haiku is a process and a prayer ;) keep at it the joy is in the trying..this works for me as a modern haiku ;)...Light & Love

    Date: 12/7/2012 6:32:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you for your adivce. This is actually a QuestionKu, so I think the format maybe a little diifferent. I'll check into it...xxoo Holly
  1. Date: 12/7/2012 7:35:00 AM
    awesome write Holly.....:) much hug Janet

  1. Date: 12/7/2012 5:18:00 AM
    A good question, Holly. - Well written! Hope your weekend will be fine. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)