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Synthesis of Senses

A splash of tonic to set the mood. A warm bath to dull the senses. A mere 10 minutes into my aqua therapy and it happens. As promised, the sandman shows up smelling of sweet death to send me to that gentle embrace I have waited for this entire day. As I walk along the clouds I leave behind drops of regret to help me find my way back to consciousness. Sensual fog to relieve me of the mediocrity that is existence. I find in this realm a peace that has escaped me in life. What seems like an eternity passes and I start to find myself among the living knowing that my only reward for this sentence is a gentle passing into that most favorable experience that refuses a long term commitment.

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Date: 10/16/2023 10:03:00 AM
This is unique and engaging. I like how you put it together with word choices. Leaving behind drops of regret is such a vivid phrase. Love this.
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Date: 10/14/2023 2:21:00 PM
the title of your poem was ideal. Your words were powerful...your description of the aqua therapy is spot on..'finding in this realm a peace...' was soothing as was your words. Nicely done, Sara
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Michael Maul
Date: 10/14/2023 2:28:00 PM
Thank you

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