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Swordmaster

I was the age when your parents give you and your siblings all the same haircut. The same age when you first discover the joy of smashing dandelions, a formative time for any child. I preferred clapping my hands around each flower, prying my sweaty palms apart, slow as a secret, to reveal each white stalk I caught. My sister, however, with our bowl cut bangs shifting with effort, preferred the stick. She was a swordmaster, a force with dead branches, a miracle to me. In a matter of seconds, twenty dandelions decapitated with eight-year-old grace. Their lithe, skinny green bodies fell to the earth as their soft skulls filled the air like snow on a summer afternoon.

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Date: 5/19/2023 12:53:00 AM
Beautiful and clever and charming - you capture in your poems a similar sensation to the moment of falling in love. Wonderful
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Date: 5/19/2023 5:57:00 PM
This is, I think, the nicest thing that anyone has ever said to me. Thank you so much for this comment : )

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