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Swiss Chocolate

Chocolate is all that she wishes She adores all that Swiss is I brought her a box But she quick changed the locks Guess I’ll go sleep with the Mrs.

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Vijay Pandit

Date: 8/12/2017 4:08:00 PM

Had a good laugh---well done!

Dean Wood
Date: 8/14/2017 10:03:00 AM

Glad you enjoyed it Vijay!

Dan Cwiak

Date: 8/9/2017 8:31:00 AM

Swiss can be things other than chocolate..."Cheez, do we have to tell you that by now?" LOL Wonderfully done, Dean.

Dean Wood
Date: 8/9/2017 10:29:00 AM

hehe, got it now! Thanks, Dean

Holly Bohto

Date: 8/8/2017 9:42:00 PM

I like the simplicity of sweet nothing's to write about in chocolates time poured into colored papers realignment..

Dean Wood
Date: 8/9/2017 10:28:00 AM

Thanks for dropping by Holly!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/8/2017 1:32:00 PM

the chocolates won; he didn't!..laughing all the way, dean.. good one.. huggs

Dean Wood
Date: 8/9/2017 10:26:00 AM

Thank Nette!

Pashang Salehi

Date: 8/7/2017 9:48:00 PM

LOL.... Cute ... very cute...

Dean Wood
Date: 8/9/2017 10:26:00 AM

Thanks! I appreciate you stopping by. -- Dean

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/7/2017 5:20:00 PM

hahaha. GREAT way to rhyme wishes!!! (too bad she will miss out on all that chocolate)

Dean Wood
Date: 8/7/2017 5:37:00 PM

hehe, Oh, she took the chocolates, then locked him out!

Jan Allison

Date: 8/7/2017 4:31:00 PM

guess the chocolates will last longer than a relationship lol great poem Dean:-) hugs

Lin Lane

Date: 8/7/2017 3:04:00 PM

He'd better get another box and a dozen long stemmers if he has a conscious. haha Good and funny, Dean.

Dean Wood
Date: 8/7/2017 3:06:00 PM

hehe, so true. Thanks Lin!

Heidi Sands

Date: 8/7/2017 12:27:00 PM

Oh now, this makes me want some of that chocolate, Dean :) But I will share ..lol

Dean Wood
Date: 8/7/2017 12:58:00 PM

hehe, sounds good!

Dale Gregory Cozart

Date: 8/7/2017 12:21:00 PM

I love that last line!

Dean Wood
Date: 8/7/2017 12:58:00 PM

I just couldn't stand to leave this buried in your comments. Chocolate needs to breath. Thanks again Dale, for the inspiration.

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/7/2017 11:45:00 AM

She didn't even share, what an evil person to not share chocolate with another, Ha! I surely loved your write my friend! A very good limerick, aren't they fun to write? What a harmonious poem, said with the greatest of ease! Awesome Work!!

Dean Wood
Date: 8/7/2017 11:48:00 AM

Thank you Russell. Glad you enjoyed it!

Tim Smith

Date: 8/7/2017 11:10:00 AM

Guess the chocolate is more satisfying...lol

Dean Wood
Date: 8/7/2017 11:11:00 AM

Ouch!

Lim'Rik Flats

Date: 8/7/2017 10:37:00 AM

:-)!!!

Dean Wood
Date: 8/7/2017 10:38:00 AM

Thanks man!