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Swirly Twirly

Swirly twirly, Floating around, Can't hear a single sound. Swirly twirly, Dancing along, Listening to a tribal song. Swirly twirly, Bouncing away, I will come back another day.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 8/4/2009 6:13:00 AM
Good Morning Tracey. I enjoyed reading your wonderful poem this morning. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/3/2009 1:58:00 PM
Nicely written. It has rhyme and rhythm. Sara
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