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Swinging On a Star

sky wrapped in rhinestones knitting hands through love’s compass as one velvet star pointing beam on embossed eyes …he moans soft in light, my ” dawn!” © Linda Marie’s Swinging on A Star By nette onclaud

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Sherese Gooden

Date: 8/2/2012 11:27:00 PM

Congratulations Nette.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 8/1/2012 7:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Linda-Marie's "Swinging On a Star" contest Nette. Love, Carol

Kash Poet

Date: 8/1/2012 7:08:00 PM

Yayayaya!!!A big congrats !!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 8/1/2012 5:31:00 PM

Beautiful, Nette!! Congrats on your first place win! Love and Blessings, Rhonda

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/1/2012 5:09:00 PM

wow, I'd not seen this. WELL deserved, my friend. Big congrats.

David Williams

Date: 8/1/2012 3:02:00 PM

Nette, congrats on your win...fabulous..David

Joseph May

Date: 8/1/2012 8:18:00 AM

nicely done Nette...congrats on your win

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/1/2012 7:47:00 AM

Many congratulations on your win xx

Debra Squyres

Date: 8/1/2012 7:15:00 AM

Wow...this is beautiful !! Congrats on your win !!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/1/2012 12:26:00 AM

CONGRATULATIONS,,, with your awesome win...xox~PD

Carrie Richards

Date: 7/31/2012 8:12:00 PM

A beautiful win!! It gleams with diamonds

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/31/2012 7:56:00 PM

congrats Nette luv on number one for your star entry.. truly beautiful..

Tim B

Date: 7/25/2012 7:28:00 PM

You have a wonderful knack for great titles, and great poetry too of course. I love the personification and the vivid imagery as usual, a beautiful poem Miss Nette. Reads like a winner to me :)

Kash Poet

Date: 7/24/2012 9:09:00 AM

Wonderful !!!!

Gwendolen Song

Date: 7/23/2012 2:28:00 AM

A rhinestone wrapped sky? Oh how amazingly sparkly!! I feel the velvet stars as well, and feel the silky image of those embossed eyes! What a relaxing night sky, Nette...luv,gwendolen

Wilma Neels

Date: 7/22/2012 5:46:00 AM

Aww, this is a beauty Nette, you just got me smiling and sighing at the same time.. that is a good thing ;) Wishing you the best for Linda's contest *hugs* Wilma

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/21/2012 1:56:00 PM

Beautiful image of love. Loved always, bl

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 7/20/2012 7:15:00 PM

Beautiful Nette, you make it hard for others in contests! :)

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/20/2012 1:47:00 PM

Awww, the love that you displayed within your great write is tremendous Nette! You sure do have talent bursting out of every part of your illustrious mind! Outstanding and creative piece here my good friend! Great Work!!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 7/20/2012 1:40:00 PM

Very expressive work..Winner's material for sure..Enjoyed reading this eve..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for the kind review of my work..Sara

Richard Palmer

Date: 7/20/2012 12:55:00 PM

great write love it Nette,Linda asked me to enter this competition gonna give it a try oxox

Painted Hunter

Date: 7/20/2012 11:02:00 AM

Nette, you never fail to amaze me. You are truly a goddess of words. I'm a fan!!

Jancarl Campi

Date: 7/20/2012 10:55:00 AM

Thanks for sharing such a beautiful work with us. Hope it is a winner, Jancarl

Joann Grisetti

Date: 7/20/2012 10:20:00 AM

A very romantic tanka - surely a winner.