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Swinging

There’s no one in the playground When I walk at break of day. The jungle gyms are empty Since no climbing’s underway. The slides and swings are waiting For the toddlers and the tots Who, with nannies, moms or dads Will later come to claim their spots. And yet this morning, I observed A woman swinging high, Her legs a‘pumping with the force To take her to the sky. Her little dog sat patiently Until her steam ran out, A private moment to enjoy With no one else about.

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Date: 2/29/2024 11:48:00 AM
- You should swing with her ... wind in the face and ... almost to heaven, Ilene :) - A lovely poem :) - hugs
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Date: 2/27/2024 7:11:00 PM
A cute poem. I like the image of an adult enjoying a second childhood.
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Date: 2/27/2024 3:30:00 PM
so moving world you describe, early i guess, i love the atmosphere and sentiment of this scene, what a cute poem, thanks poet
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Date: 2/27/2024 1:15:00 PM
aww what a cute poem Ilene - I was worried where the poem would go with the title (I do do swing dancing and get teased I'm a 'swinger' lol) got to say I love been known to sit on a swing and relive my childhood days lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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