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Swimming With the Stars

swimming with the stars when I dream I dream of swimming in a sea of stars far off in another galaxy to the left of mars far away from country western and heavy metal bars it is place where my hands and feet drift away from me slowly and webbed frog fins replace them my life is happy swimming amongst the shooting stars a place where men can never hurt me ever again an ocean of quietness surrounds me as I swim around gracefully brutal men don't crush me and hurt or bother me there they are not allowed I go to float around and think I can twirl and whirl around as much as I like until I turn bright pink swimming amongst the stars is a better place to live for me far away from stupid men

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Date: 6/21/2010 7:30:00 PM
Ps. Smile, aside from my question, "This," is a very soft, colourful and beautiful poem ~ filled with such sweet images, of, an extremely talented and lovely lady I believe!!!:) ~
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Date: 6/21/2010 7:27:00 PM
Smile! Why do they have to be stupid dear? I just picked up your soup notes but, can't access they as I have so warmly mentioned to "Your Preciousness, Lovely Marie Harrison!!!" ~ Smile, its good to see "Your Tender & Gifted Heart" again dear ~ Smile, but tell me please, why, why do men have to be? Smile, "My Love to You," John!:) ~
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