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Swimming Pool

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Swimming Pool

Black lucid sky-

Sun and moon’s swimming pool

Stars are guards.







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  1. Date: 9/30/2013 5:33:00 AM
    Fine metaphors and similies to create a romantic picture, Kiran

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa
    Date: 10/23/2013 4:39:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa
    Date: 10/10/2013 11:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks Dr. Ram
  1. Date: 9/30/2013 4:45:00 AM
    - Kiran, well written haiku! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa
    Date: 10/10/2013 11:04:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thank you anne.
    Bantawa Avatar Kiran Bantawa
    Date: 9/30/2013 5:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks anne!