Get Your Premium Membership

Swells That Compel

SWELLS THAT COMPEL the fall moon's lull shows mystique silence across skies branches shadow dance rice seedling patch strewn upon well-plough watered fields-- globular tummies from my bikini to quilted silk evening wraps -- chrysanthemum blooms rainbow processions passing through cities thru-fare -- church bells count the mass (c)Olive Eloisa 6:50am August 18, 2014

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 10/17/2014 4:03:00 AM
globular tummies are great. Olive Eloisa in full bloom.
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 10/17/2014 10:25:00 AM
thanks much .. :) I appreciate it.. :D
Date: 8/20/2014 8:12:00 AM
I am enlightened Olive_eloi! Love all the set, but the first one caught my attention first! [still catching up on mail backlog!] Take care & hugs. // paul
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/22/2014 5:05:00 AM
Catch up catch up Paul..:) lol thanks much anyway..:) wc back..:)
Date: 8/19/2014 1:32:00 PM
3 still makes no sense? L & L
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/19/2014 11:19:00 PM
hahha .. :D i deleted.. really can;t find the right words for the one i meant to have . :D
Date: 8/19/2014 8:46:00 AM
Ut oh fix line lay out dear. Send again the one that had the medals to my soup mail Light & Love
Login to Reply
Date: 8/19/2014 8:18:00 AM
Words that glow my friend!!! BBBravoooooo!!!!!!
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/19/2014 10:36:00 AM
ThAnks for the remark Robert..:)
Date: 8/18/2014 8:46:00 AM
wonderful images Light & Love
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/19/2014 10:35:00 AM
Debbie thank you so much..:) really appreciate it.. Thanks for reminding me how haiku's are done.. ..:)
Date: 8/18/2014 4:21:00 AM
Love ur haikus Olive! Fourth one my fav! Best wishes dear!
Login to Reply
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 8/18/2014 9:58:00 AM
Dr.. :D thanks much.. :) im sorry can;t reply soonest time.. :D

Book: Shattered Sighs