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Sweets

Our love was so tasty and sweet now it's sour and inedible. I should have chosen another selection of sweets. Instead I chose a mesmerizing unpredictable bit size.

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Date: 9/16/2021 9:15:00 AM
Hi Alexis, i have had a month of mishaps, the worst been the worst fall in my life, but no broken bones, it will be three weeks tomorrow and i still feel its effects, and all this whilst we were moving homes. People say they can't read my soup mails - i'll send you a test mail later please let me know if you can't open it dear friend. This is a sad poem, horrible to be let down. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/11/2021 1:56:00 PM
Funny, I always like the sour candies, wonder what that means?
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Date: 9/9/2021 10:28:00 AM
maybe he is one to put back in the pick and mix Alexis:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/9/2021 3:30:00 AM
It's sad when a sweet love in the beginning turns out to be sour... Loved reading your verse dear Alexis... Have a lovely day... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/9/2021 2:11:00 AM
Short and metaphoric.
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Date: 9/9/2021 12:16:00 AM
Sometimes we make mistakes in life but we learn from them. Tom
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Date: 9/8/2021 7:08:00 PM
Hi Alexis, it’s strange that a love that’s sweet and tasty at the start can turn sour and end with broken hearts… Belle
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