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Sweetness

The cold shower water, Falls, Seductively against our bodies, Especially yours, Since your body represents, A candy shop galore, And i couldn't ask for anything more, Because of the sweetness you produce, Satisfies my needs, My hunger, My thrust, My lust, My curse, Of falling in love, With a full heart, Waiting to burst.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/23/2011 7:58:00 PM
I wish i could write like this.This is amazing!!
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Date: 9/23/2011 6:16:00 PM
Happy weekend enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry today Kriss. Love, Carol
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