Home » Poems » Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser » Sweetest Scandal

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser - Premium Member

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser | + Follow Poet |

Sweetest Scandal

SWEETEST SCANDAL one sunny smiley day on a busy highway mr. CADBURRY meets sweet HERSHEYS without TRACKER in MARATHON they take their "SNICKERS" going to M&M's hideout they share COMBOS of hugs and KISSES with BUTTERFINGER on hand and juicy TOOTSIE ROLL together they rock an roll brighter than MARS better even than MILKY WAY GALAXY reaching peak of CLOUD 9 after nine solid months GOODNESS KNOWS there are CELEBRATIONS and KUDOS cause BABY RUTH comes out saying Chocolates please! _____________________________ ***Sponsor Carol Eastman Contest Name Story Poem Contest ~~1st Place~~ OLIVE ELOISA GUILLERMO 1:14 am, May 08, 2014

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

James Fraser

Date: 7/20/2015 12:12:00 PM

Hey little one, many congratulations on your win in the "Story" contest, warm hugs//James xxx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/16/2015 7:04:00 PM

This was sweet fun! Congrats.

Elaine George

Date: 7/15/2015 4:09:00 PM

Very creative, Elosia. Elaine

Alexis Y.

Date: 7/14/2015 8:40:00 PM

Olive,you penned a clever piece. What a sweet write. Congratulations on your win:-) Alexis

Eve Roper

Date: 7/14/2015 10:21:00 AM

Haha... a wonderland of chocolate to bath in Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/14/2015 2:03:00 AM

Hi Olive, Congrats in Carol's story poem win. always ~~ LINDA ~~

Skat A

Date: 7/14/2015 12:16:00 AM

Olive, Congratulations on your sweet win. Love SKAT

Jan Allison

Date: 7/13/2015 1:36:00 PM

great to read this sweet treat again - congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Deborah Shiells

Date: 5/12/2014 9:23:00 AM

Hi Olive, This was the sweetest of the sweets:-) This is my kinda read. Thank you for this wonderful write my friend. Thanks for sharing with us here. Peace, Deborah

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 7/15/2015 8:03:00 PM

Hi Deborah, I thank you for stopping by and leaving a comment.. =")!

Paul Callus

Date: 5/9/2014 4:30:00 PM

Olive_eloi, glad you managed to retrieve this beauty from the depths of your mind:) ...by the way....any dark chocolate around!!! :) // paul

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/9/2014 4:41:00 PM

Weee I have Paul kisses and patchi as they are my favorites..:) weeee join me in three bars not much as for the teeth..:) :P

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/8/2014 1:56:00 PM

sweet concoction with remarkable personification, olive...ang tamis!.. huggs

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/8/2014 5:20:00 PM

hahahha thanks much Nette I appreciate your comment.. :)

Jake Ponce

Date: 5/8/2014 12:48:00 AM

My teeth hurt right after this sugary explosion. I could almost imagine you in Willy Wonka's attire, conjuring treats in your fancy little factory or the witch's house in Hansel and Gretel. Yummy write, Olive!

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser
Date: 5/8/2014 6:13:00 AM

Thank you so much Jake I appreciate the comments.. :)