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Below is the poem entitled SWEET WATERMELON LIPS which was written by poet nette onclaud. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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honeyed flavor drips
        on watermelon’s core, pink
          flesh sweetening mouths
…a zing like nectar's fragrance
to thrill when popped rind gushes

breaths taste moist syrup
    earthy aphrodisiac
               when melon lips grind,
          … as he sinks his teeth in mine
nibbling juicy midnight love !

* aphrodisiac has 5 syllables
Sweet or Salty Contest of Andrea Dietrich

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  1. Date: 11/7/2013 11:56:00 AM
    nice win....SKAT

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 10:14:00 PM
    Oh, nette I like this very much, congrats on your win. Thank you for coming to read my SEASONS ;}

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 7:21:00 PM
    Nette, Congratulations On your way to xool Sweet & Sour win... always~ Linda aka PD

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 8:18:00 AM
    Ah h!! Great quality poetry..Enjoyed the mood of the poem..Sara

  1. Date: 11/6/2013 12:07:00 AM
    Sensual yes. Congrads.

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 8:50:00 PM
    Sensual write, Nette. Congrats on your placement!

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 6:11:00 PM
    Phew! that gets the juices flowing. Congrats on the win.

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 3:35:00 PM
    hmmm very very suggestive ;) ;) Congrad's on your win. Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 11:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 10:24:00 AM
    Congratulations nette....:-) :-) :-) :-) :-)

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 7:48:00 AM
    Beautiful imagery gave it away to me this must have been yours! I love the symbolism in it. Congrats on your win, Nette.

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 12:51:00 AM
    Well if the contest isn't over..I say this is a top place item in my view; if its over anyway, i say thanks for the quality write Nette..!

  1. Date: 11/5/2013 12:35:00 AM
    What a wonderful poem to read. Let me read again, oh by the way, Netty is the best!...huggs:)

  1. Date: 10/30/2013 6:22:00 PM
    Speaking of watermelon, check out my latest blog if you like...I know you are a voracious reader and if you haven't read this guy's stuff yet, I HIGHLY recommend...

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 10:29:00 AM
    sweet tasting beautiful piece

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 3:38:00 AM
    Blood pressure pill and cold shower time again....Scintillating and sensuous! - Tim

  1. Date: 10/29/2013 1:57:00 AM
    Ah, as only the Queen of Linguistics could do it. I enjoyed this sensual write, Nette. You're sure to do well in the contest. Licia :-)

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 9:22:00 AM
    Andrea is going to love this watermellonicious post ..I am sure. : )Wowzer.

  1. Date: 10/28/2013 1:08:00 AM
    Thank you for your comments on my black cat it is about my new kitten. she is this crazy but i love the little beast anyway.

  1. Date: 10/27/2013 3:00:00 PM
    Winner winner winner.....:-) :-) :-)