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Sweet Veneer

The flower wilting in the vase Fades to grey tho' once so bright, Beauty can but meet decay Just as day gives in to night. It's sweet veneer we look upon Yet beauty dwells upon the cusp, Given time 'tis all our fate Given time... we are but dust. Entry for Writing Challenge - Decay - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France. 23/9/2020

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Date: 11/30/2021 8:30:00 PM
So sadly true Gary - dust we all become. But before that, we'll have a slice of joy, won't we? Another fine write. Cheers, Brian
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Date: 9/30/2020 5:54:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Gary ... beautiful and sensitive :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/30/2020 5:55:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise. :)
Date: 9/29/2020 9:28:00 PM
Lovely canvas you've written, Gary , congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/30/2020 1:05:00 AM
Thank you Eve. :)
Date: 9/29/2020 3:58:00 PM
Gary, Congratulations..! I find your poem gentle, touching, sweet. Perfectly poised simplicity. A well earned Win.!
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Date: 9/29/2020 4:01:00 PM
Thank you Sigrid. :)
Date: 9/29/2020 1:49:00 PM
Gary, congratulations on your win in my Decay Writing Challenge with this wonderful poem, I love the image too _Constance
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Date: 9/29/2020 2:08:00 PM
Thank you Constance. :)
Date: 9/29/2020 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on the win Gary! This is lovely, Linda
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/29/2020 1:33:00 PM
Thank you Linda. :)
Date: 9/23/2020 1:57:00 PM
Wow! Beautifully moving imagery spills gracefully from your wonderful pen, Gary. Best wishes for a win and warmest wishes for you.. ~Susan
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/23/2020 2:20:00 PM
Thank you Susan. :)
Date: 9/23/2020 11:12:00 AM
nice one! :)
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Gary Smith
Date: 9/23/2020 11:12:00 AM
Thank you Susan. :)

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