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Sweet Thrills

My lips parted ways As her bazooms touched my chest, this unusual state is killing and intriguing, cold sweat drops, as sweet thrills move. Olusegun Arowolo 04/11/12 Contest:'1-6 lines of Romance&Love' Sponsored by Russel Sivey

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/20/2012 4:13:00 PM

A great moment caught in a tanka! Enthralled with this write, Olusegun. Wonderful win. Gwendolen

Gwendolen Song

Date: 4/20/2012 4:12:00 PM

Muchos romance in this heated write, Olusegun...Congrats to a wonderful moment in tanka...Gwendolen

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2012 1:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement in Russell's "1-6 Lines of Romance and Love" contest Olusegun. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/15/2012 7:37:00 PM

Woa!!! what a sweet thrill that is!!! Congrats on this one, my friend.

Ralph Taylor

Date: 4/15/2012 5:43:00 PM

Congrats on your win, Olusegun. Excellent. Nice going. Ralph

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/15/2012 2:00:00 PM

A sultry write Olusegun ;) congratulations on your win ;)

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/15/2012 8:14:00 AM

congrats Olusegun on a fantastid write and win.. such energy and vibrant visuals.. bazoom.....

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/15/2012 4:49:00 AM

OA!! Congratulations on your win!!! well done with this sultry piece...big hugs,love deb