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Sweet Surrender

I would willingly lose myself, to find rest in your iridescence Thirsting the taste of your sacred place, craving your inner presence I would freely submit myself, offer my sweet surrender Kneel at the altar of your love presenting gifts of endless splendor I would happily give you my trust and all that it may hold Intertwining our spirits one unto another until the two become one soul I would willingly be consumed by your thoughts and take root within your dreams Take you beyond euphoria, show you things, you’ve never seen I would willingly taste of your skin and savor your blissful essence Seductively sip of your springs, and relish your quintessence I would willingly manifest your yearnings, make your desires reality Ride to the realms of seventh heaven; act out your wildest fantasy I would happily fall to my knees and worship you as a king Reverence you with admiration, respect and untamed sexuality I would freely wrap you within the warmness of my femininity Liquefy your lingering lust, Melt onto your masculinity, I would willingly freeze this moment in time, just to live this life with you Love you the way you deserve to be loved. The way that only I, can do. Chiquita Chiamaka Baity

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 9/28/2011 7:19:00 PM
very nice write girl. i loved it. you should give my your email or face book if you have one.
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Date: 9/22/2011 7:18:00 AM
Wow, what a wonderful piece of you, a poem coated with your emotions, this gives the reader a glimpse of who you are. beautiful work .............
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Date: 9/20/2011 10:49:00 PM
one misstake. love you the way you deserve? change it to "desire" then i will be compleatly captivated. john. your on a role.
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Date: 9/19/2011 4:51:00 PM
Am short of words..this poem is giving me that wowing effect..splendid..am jealous ooo..emmm okay...beautiful done...so so loving it
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Date: 9/19/2011 10:33:00 AM
You need to enter some of these poems in outside contests. Haven't read anything like this since I wrote Transgression. It sizzles and I love it.
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Date: 9/19/2011 12:14:00 AM
Very passionate writing. A great way with words too. It should do well in the contest!
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Date: 9/18/2011 4:25:00 PM
Very pleasant reading
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Date: 9/18/2011 2:55:00 PM
Passionate..Sara
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Date: 9/18/2011 2:57:00 PM
Thanks for the kind review of my lastest post..Sara
Date: 9/18/2011 2:32:00 PM
Very romantic and passionate write,Baity.I enjoyed it.Thank you for reading my 'Return Journey.............'Hope you will respond to my request/below the poem.....Luv.FABIYAS
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:58:00 PM
wow!this is so passionate write!A fave !!Thanks for your kind comment'at my page..
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Date: 9/18/2011 4:37:00 AM
your compliment means a ton b/c I know you mean it....I've had enough ppl tell me on here that I was their "FAVE" and as soon as I don't comment on one of their busted poems....it's bye bye ME! If you truly love a writer you read them whether or not YOU are good! Right? I don't like lying to ppl...SO PLEASE UNDERSTAND, I work with hundreds of writers/poets on a weekly basis, and YOU got the "IT"....No BS! OWN IT GIRL. Your words kick me in the GNUTz!!! oh so good tho'! :)
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Date: 9/18/2011 2:46:00 AM
This is that damn hot fire you spit my way in the email. I Love the shit out of it! GREAT GREAT GREAT...I shall give it an 8....ah dratz! only goes up to 7 Rate....soup mail
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Date: 9/18/2011 1:22:00 AM
Ooo...you say it so well. You make me tingle with delight. Most girls I know, though, somewhere in there would slip in a mention of jewelry.
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Date: 9/18/2011 12:24:00 AM
very thought provoking , cold shower time... spring has arrived its getting steamy here. Passion flows here most the time, cos love is sweet it is no crime, twould his life complete...
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Date: 9/17/2011 9:20:00 PM
Terrific sensual write lovely Lady Chiquita...with love...old Jack
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Date: 9/17/2011 5:07:00 PM
Smile, *^_^* “I Was Somewhat Loved Like This A Couple of Times Once Upon A Time Yet I Was Too Busy Being Wrapped Amid This Fleshes Reasons of What One Might Say, Became The Clay That Led Unto A Day My Dear, Precious & Priceless, Blessed & Beautiful Chiquita! *^_^* But, I Love Your Love & I Love Your Passion &, What Life Would Not Love to Be Loved Within This Beautiful Way *^_^* Lifted High to Never Return, From Its Sky *^_^* Very Beautiful & Thank You, for Your Beauties Kind Visit, My Dear!” === My Love Unto Your Sweet Softness, Always & Forever, Jasper *
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Date: 9/17/2011 4:14:00 PM
A Beautiful write my friend.... warm throughout....Michael
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:57:00 PM
hot stuff, powerful emotions of a woman. now this is a love that is rare to find. i can but envy the person who is the recipient of this romance. great write
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Date: 9/17/2011 3:53:00 PM
nicely done Chiquita, I enjoyed the read....God Bless...Taz
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