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Sweet Sunset Wedding

My Wedding Day Is Special Because... Sponsor: Olive Eloisa Guillermo Sacred vows we swore, consecrating two blessed souls in matrimony The anticipation before I held daddy's hand walking down the aisle, he gave me a kiss on the cheek and wore a proud smile. Along the shores of a harmonious island is where we became one, holiness combined with true dedication, oh my, we were so young. The smell of his sweet cologne brought me back to the old days, My tender scent I carried rested gently on my bouquet. I still remember our vows like yesterday we were on that alter, we promised to be loyal and forgiving if ever we should falter. Death may separate our fleshly bodies while here on earth, but the connected souls we share would prove our days of worth. We swore that good health would never be taken for granted, by some chance we get sick, our comfort would never be abandoned. We don't care about material wealth, more money more problems, If by some chance we grow poor, our humble nature won't be forgotten. We took an oath before our family, more importantly the Lord, and all our dreams of starting a family would be our greatest reward. Even if the skies turned grey and if our lives should meet obstacles, the truth of passion would create a future where anything is possible. Separate entities brought together by the good Lord's plan, off into the endearing sunset we walked away, hand in hand. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Date Written: February 22, 2016

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Date: 2/25/2016 9:58:00 AM
There is this unique insurance your works always give my expectations And that satisfaction only builds more castles for my curiosity to thrive, waiting for subsequent results of your talent and thinking.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/25/2016 5:15:00 PM
Many thanks Funom, you made my day a little extra special :)-luloo
Date: 2/23/2016 10:49:00 PM
Brings a smile to my face :) Very special day indeed! Beautifully written.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/24/2016 10:29:00 AM
Thank you sweet Carol :)-luloo
Date: 2/22/2016 5:02:00 PM
This is quite lovely, Laura. Another glimpse into your happiness.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/22/2016 8:22:00 PM
Thank you lovely Lin..my sweet friend..:)-luloo
Date: 2/22/2016 2:23:00 PM
My friends call me Danny, Dan or DT but you may call me whatever you are comfortable with:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/22/2016 2:24:00 PM
Ohhhh...lol I think I'll pick...hmm...DT....hehe :)
Date: 2/22/2016 2:16:00 PM
Laura, being old fashioned I was taught that a "man's" word was his/her bond. Nothing in this world is a sacred as two people vowing before God in vows of matrimony. This is such a concurring poem to my beliefs. I love it and offer my Humble 7 of approval. Peace my dear:)
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/22/2016 2:28:00 PM
ps...what you said is great news. I don't think there are many people out there know how important these simply said vows are. Before God, too. I take that very seriously. So many people give up too easily..Thanks :)
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/22/2016 2:19:00 PM
Thank you sweet Daniel :)-luloo
Date: 2/22/2016 2:09:00 PM
what a beautiful story LuLoo good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx7
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/22/2016 2:19:00 PM
Thank you lady Jan...:)-luloo
Date: 2/22/2016 2:04:00 PM
What a beautiful story. Thanks for sharing.
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Lu Loo
Date: 2/22/2016 2:18:00 PM
Thank you Jeannie :)-luloo

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